Others expertises

Robert Oosthout, Attorney at law, mediator and wealthcoach from Netherlands left me some message to my profile on Ecademy. You see below our conversation.

Dear Emma,

Thank you for visiting my profile.

What is your expertise?

What is the biggest project you are working on right now?

How can I bring you in contact with people that can support you in realizing your projects?

My invitation is that we connect, so we can support eachother.

If you reply to this message we are connected.

Kind regards,

Robert Oosthout.


I replied him:

Dear Robert Ooshout,

Many thanks to your message. It's a big honor for me to connect to the people as you!

For responding your message, I'm independent consulting and my expertises are based on Audit, Consulting, Organization and Training.

Example given:
To the IT, some directors don't have the good view of their organization. They cite lack of appropriate data quality in their information systems and they lost so much revenue to the impact of poor data quality management. So I can get an intervention and give my expertise on how having good data structure.

I have some project to work with HR too because I'm an extraordinary headhunting, I have a good organization on it.

I wish to be a famous...and making some advertisement of some products as perfume, sun glasses or getting movie or being speaker!

Right, I have many and many wish and really want to realize most of them!

Please look after my profile, it gives you some details of my expertises.

It will be pleasure for me if you could introduce me to one of your experts contacts
.
Hope hearing from you very soon.

Best regards,

Emma Ravalimanana

Auditing expression - Consulting

Georgina Lester is a friend contact on Ecademy. She is PR and Marketing Consultant from UK. She wants having some good French expression, she asked me to give her some training on French expression.

You'll see below our conversation:

Dear Georgina,

You are very welcome!

I want just to rectify your syntax error to your last french message. So, when you write in French next time, try having the same structure. Avoid all parasiticals words! I'll give you some details when you are coming to Paris.

Your message was:

Cher Emma,

Je suis tres heureuse! Votre reponse - tres bon! Vous parlez francais tres tres bien!!

Je pourrais éventuellement vous donner quelques cours d'expressions françaises pour améliorer le niveau si vous le souhaitez. Oui, oui, s'il vous plait!

J'espère avoir votre nouvelle très bientôt. Peut etre en englais - je crois que c'est plus facile pour moi - a ce moment!

A bientot!

Cordialement!

Georgina

My point of view with the correction about it

Chère Emma,

Je suis très heureuse de recevoir votre réponse. Vous parlez très très bien le français! (normally, you hadn't say that because this expression is available for anyone who speaks French very well!)

Je pourrais éventuellement vous donner quelques cours d'expressions françaises pour améliorer votre niveau si vous le souhaitez. Oui, j'en souhaiterais vraiment!

J'espère recevoir très bientôt de votre nouvelle. Peut-être, vous allez m'écrire en anglais. Pour moi pour le moment, je crois que c'est mieux!

A bientôt!

Cordialement,

Georgina

Hope we are having some meetings to Paris. We'll talk more about French expression.

Best regards,

Emma

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Bill Gates's question on LinkedIn

How can we do more to encourage young people to pursue careers in science and technology?

I want to share to you my think about it.

Excellent and interesting question. But the question is so waste because it's concerning all of the young people around the world. I'm trying to give my think about it. We limit this discussion to such science as computer science for example and to any continent but it also available to others sciences obviously. Everybody dreams having great life but If science destroy life means the science development computer raising down the number of employment means raising up the strike number. The young people have no more interest to purse any career on it. I don't give details, that's clear I think!
Please,
- measure space
- count population number
- calculate natality number/sec
- calculate teenager number/country
- calculate adult or employee by science career number/country
- calculate mortality number/country
get the relation between those datas.
And if you can give the concrete example to any year that there are some post create or post free to any career in science at x time. The population verify this information if its really attainable for any year. Sure, the parents explain and motivate their children to pursue science career. And the young people have a big motivated to pursue career on it.
Don't forget!
Science career doesn't involved without literaty career. So both must sharing interest!!!

Die Zunkuft der Ökonomie written by Christian Makossa

I read and get correction to an article written by an economist german about economy.

Its an important article about the Future Economy. The headline is "Die Zunkuft der Ökonomie".

You'll see my comments about it.

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Dear Christian,

I read your article about Ökonomie. It's really interesting as article! I'll give you my comment of it in english.

My essentials points: The global structure is good with logical structure. It shows that you are scientist.

Only when you start to write the sentences, if possible start with the positive think next negative think.
E.g: you said: "At the weekend, I not only in economics, literature research, journals and contributions at the forum foresight in the internet platform XING and....".
You had to write:
"This weekend, I have some economy work, literature research, journals and at the same time I contribute at the forum foresight in the internet platform XING and....".

Avoid the arrow if possible on how to the system works. The better use the diagrams.

Get space each paragraph and don't forget to use the dot each sentence's end.

I think if you get the correction. It will be the good dissertation.

Hope hearing from you very soon.

Emma

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Audit to Facebook

I connected to Facebook today. I received an invitation from one people from my contact's list to challenge a Quizz Game " Soccer team"
I remarked to his profile that a message I sent to some of my friend's list last week had a bad direction and it arrived to it profile. The result, the system is trafficking by anyone!!! by who? by anyone who wanted be a favor to receive any message from anyone. To this case the Facebook system is trafficking by him who sent me an invitation or by his friend's group!!!!